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MLP - Processed Cycle by DShou MLP - Processed Cycle by DShou






Edit - Sharing how it looked in the 5 phases together from sketch to finish here - [link]



Drawing requested by ~ShiningLorenzo:iconshininglorenzo: like . . . 3 months ago ><;
Criteria : Fan-art for Rainbow Factory/Awoken - Glaze, Joe and H8 Seed in White Jumpsuits, H8 Seed showing regret while the other two still showing a dark expression.

Sketch from 2 months ago -
Revised Sketch from half a month ago -

As can be seen, I changed a lot of stuff between the two sketches, and ugh, I hate how it's been 3 months, but even I gotta admit this drawing wouldn't have been at this quality had I finished it earlier. I learned a lot over these 3 months after all from cleaner lines, coloring/shading/lighting adjustments, filters, perspective and more.

It's probably impossible to tell, but the color of the 'POV Pony' is light purple.



My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic series belongs to Hasbro




v Would love a critique! Make sure to note however -
The 'vision' is how well I portrayed the criteria of the request.
The 'originality' is not based on being completely original with characters or ideas, but rather how the image is portrayed.
No comments about OC designs/colors as they are not mine, have been requested in the critiera, and are not my decision to change.

If you can't find any flaws you could constructively note, just comment instead. v
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:iconthestorm117:
Awoken. :iconmotherofgodfaceplz: Now for critique... I'm going to guess that you based this off of the PMV by Brony Dance Party. I can see some familiarity in both this and the video, such as colour and background. That said, the vision is clear, another pony being submitted into the Rainbow Factory, with Glaze and Joe looming over it. The expressions and POV's do wonders for this piece, with the view being dynamic and the expressions on Dance and Glaze being... Well, terrifying :noes: The colouring and shading on this is quite good, it does add a lot more depth. I do like how you have Glaze and Dance standing in the shadows, while H8 is illuminated in the light of the spectra. Perhaps a nod at this epiphany? :shrug: Impact overall: Quite dynamic, a very interesting POV, good expressions, and some really good shading and colouring. If anything can be improved on however, it would have to be the background, it lacks the detail that the rest of this picture carries. That aside, great piece :iconrainbowdashlaplz:
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:iconjetfox89:
JetFox89 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You dont mind if i use this as a movie poster do you?
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Pristine1281 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh one more thing, what exactly is a filter?  I hear about them, but don't know what they're for.
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:iconpristine1281:
Pristine1281 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well damn!!!!  This perspective is awesome.  It makes the looker feel like he or she is the pony (or victim).  That is pretty scary!!!  I did watch the Awaken video and honestly it's awesome, I just can watch the park where the actual victim is killed.
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MasterDerek-118 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:iconvinylscratch111:
VinylScratch111 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Question: WHY DOES EVERYONE MAKE WOODEN TOASTER A GIRL?! HE'S A DUUUUUUDEE!!!
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:icondshou:
DShou Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Because his OC is a female?
He stated that he didn't like stallion's "blocky" snout designs as the reason why
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:iconvinylscratch111:
VinylScratch111 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmmmmm......Still, he doesn't need eyelashes (in my opinion).
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:iconicebubbles18:
icebubbles18 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good...no... not really good...suspense................. the best friggon woodentoaster/brony dance party (whatever) thing i have seen in forever. Great job
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
All of the failures fuel the success of the bloody and visceral weather game of chess.
Because you disappoint us you'll pay the price. Now, accept your fate and die in the Pegasus Device.
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:iconinvaderzen1234:
InvaderZen1234 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Artist
In the rainbow factory, where all your fears and horrors come true....
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:iconnaomionda123cool:
naomionda123cool Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awesome~!
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:iconmetalbladepegasus:
MetalBladePegasus Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Awoken in the Rainbow Factory...Awesome!!!
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:icongamergir8:
gamergir8 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
can i use this in a video? I'll give you full credit in the description! :D

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:icondshou:
DShou Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ye sure, just so long as credit is provided it's fine
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:iconproteans:
Proteans Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
can i use it?
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:icondshou:
DShou Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
for?
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:iconproteans:
Proteans Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
a video :3
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:icondshou:
DShou Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
If you credit me and link the artwork in the description, sure :3
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:iconproteans:
Proteans Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
thanks
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:iconmydevianartstuff91:
mydevianartstuff91 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
also, SOMEPONY HELP ME!!!!!wait, I can fly since im a pegasi.
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:iconmydevianartstuff91:
mydevianartstuff91 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I subscribed to brontdanceparty, woodentoaster, and H8seed
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:icondattoonywarriortoon:
datTOONYwarriortoon Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
love it
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Portal15Art Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Incredible !! A great song and a great imagen !! This is EPIC !!! Good work !! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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:iconskullkittenz21:
Skullkittenz21 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, AWOKEN WAS EPIC!
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:icondinda221:
dinda221 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
this is so awesome! hey shou can you please make moar rainbow factory? :iconpweaseplz: plzzzzzzzz i really like ur arts! :D
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:icondshou:
DShou Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
If I ever get around to it x3; though no promises
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:icondinda221:
dinda221 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
ok well i really want u to make moar cuz u r awesome
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AlphaEX1 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Student Interface Designer
hmmm one thing i dont get that u have to be a pegesus to work at the rainbow factory.... but BronyDanceParty isent a pegesus.... WTF? O_o
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horsesrock847 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice!
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:iconbrook2003roxmc:
brook2003roxMC Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
hey guys this is from the game on roblox cupcakes anr rainbow factory did coco ask promo?
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:iconpilotsolaris:
PilotSolaris Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
:iconheavyplz::iconsaysplz: NYET! IS NOT FROM STUPID BABY ROBLOX GAME! Is from song! Look!: www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRx_iX…
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:iconbrook2003roxmc:
brook2003roxMC Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
NYET QUIT BEING A DOOCHE MINECRAFT IS 2O% COOLER ANYWAYS
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:iconpilotsolaris:
PilotSolaris Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
:iconheavyplz::iconsaysplz: Da! Minecraft is better game!
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:iconbrook2003roxmc:
brook2003roxMC Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
hell ya it is
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:iconflakyfan19:
flakyfan19 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Brave charger(my OC):NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! please I'm a pegasus! don't kill me
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:icondefender-of-people:
Defender-of-people Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That POV.... wow....
YOU ARE GOING SOMEWHERE WITH THIS!
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:iconspectrumspoof:
SpectrumSpoof Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is going in my favorites FOR SURE!!!
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:icontrianqledude:
TrianqleDude Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I wish you could draw me.... Can you? :iconfluttershysqueeplz:
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:icondshou:
DShou Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sorry, I don't take requests considering I'll be doing commissions later
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:iconedna-knight:
Edna-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gawd, I love this song so much, I think, I'll call it my favorite at the moment. It has such a profound story and the sound as well~ *-*
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blacklina17 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is this based on rainbow factory?
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:icondshou:
DShou Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes, and the song Awoken as well!
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Kronoxus Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
I like it
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Pinkieshy345 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
:iconmotherofgodfaceplz: don't kill me D:
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dindaxglaze Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
this is soooooooooo amazing wip it!!
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dindaxglaze Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
aw ur so cute plz ad me on the victims list1
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:iconyefta03:
yefta03 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LETS KILL THEM But noit that silver guy
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:iconlaser-pancakes:
Laser-Pancakes Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I can't stop staring at Glaze :stare:
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:iconxx-chanour:
xx-Chanour Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too
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