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MLP - Processed Cycle by DShou MLP - Processed Cycle by DShou






Edit - Sharing how it looked in the 5 phases together from sketch to finish here - [link]



Drawing requested by ~ShiningLorenzo:iconshininglorenzo: like . . . 3 months ago ><;
Criteria : Fan-art for Rainbow Factory/Awoken - Glaze, Joe and H8 Seed in White Jumpsuits, H8 Seed showing regret while the other two still showing a dark expression.

Sketch from 2 months ago -
Revised Sketch from half a month ago -

As can be seen, I changed a lot of stuff between the two sketches, and ugh, I hate how it's been 3 months, but even I gotta admit this drawing wouldn't have been at this quality had I finished it earlier. I learned a lot over these 3 months after all from cleaner lines, coloring/shading/lighting adjustments, filters, perspective and more.

It's probably impossible to tell, but the color of the 'POV Pony' is light purple.



My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic series belongs to Hasbro




v Would love a critique! Make sure to note however -
The 'vision' is how well I portrayed the criteria of the request.
The 'originality' is not based on being completely original with characters or ideas, but rather how the image is portrayed.
No comments about OC designs/colors as they are not mine, have been requested in the critiera, and are not my decision to change.

If you can't find any flaws you could constructively note, just comment instead. v
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Awoken. :iconmotherofgodfaceplz: Now for critique... I'm going to guess that you based this off of the PMV by Brony Dance Party. I can see some familiarity in both this and the video, such as colour and background. That said, the vision is clear, another pony being submitted into the Rainbow Factory, with Glaze and Joe looming over it. The expressions and POV's do wonders for this piece, with the view being dynamic and the expressions on Dance and Glaze being... Well, terrifying :noes: The colouring and shading on this is quite good, it does add a lot more depth. I do like how you have Glaze and Dance standing in the shadows, while H8 is illuminated in the light of the spectra. Perhaps a nod at this epiphany? :shrug: Impact overall: Quite dynamic, a very interesting POV, good expressions, and some really good shading and colouring. If anything can be improved on however, it would have to be the background, it lacks the detail that the rest of this picture carries. That aside, great piece :iconrainbowdashlaplz:
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MasterDerek-118 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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VinylScratch111 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Question: WHY DOES EVERYONE MAKE WOODEN TOASTER A GIRL?! HE'S A DUUUUUUDEE!!!
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DShou Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Because his OC is a female?
He stated that he didn't like stallion's "blocky" snout designs as the reason why
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VinylScratch111 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmmmmm......Still, he doesn't need eyelashes (in my opinion).
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icebubbles18 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good...no... not really good...suspense................. the best friggon woodentoaster/brony dance party (whatever) thing i have seen in forever. Great job
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StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
All of the failures fuel the success of the bloody and visceral weather game of chess.
Because you disappoint us you'll pay the price. Now, accept your fate and die in the Pegasus Device.
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InvaderZen1234 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Artist
In the rainbow factory, where all your fears and horrors come true....
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naomionda123cool Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awesome~!
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MetalBladePegasus Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Awoken in the Rainbow Factory...Awesome!!!
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gamergir8 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
can i use this in a video? I'll give you full credit in the description! :D

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