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Well, here's my January drawing, I paid attention to shading/lighting as much as I did in "MLP - Together", and as well, since I revealed the secrets to how I draw my eye-style, I decided to kick it up a notch to test out a more advanced style.
Using that new line-tool I used in "MLP - Wandering", but apparently I naturally draw at this line-width, not how I did the other drawing. If I were to tone the size down then I could imitate the thin-line style of the other drawing again 'though some more potentially for future drawings.
I wanted to pair Twily and Dashie together again, 'though not blatantly shipping for this drawing, (but I suppose my initial intention was shipping). Just having the two peacefully talking together on a walk, something simple for me to practice more on the coloring and less on any fancy positioning/poses/backgrounds and such.
It really is pretty simple, in a way - (gonna use it as a wallpaper now~)
Approximate Time to Complete : 5~6 hours
My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic series belongs to Hasbro
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I like this deviation very much. Everything about this is great, well, mostly everything. What is the point of a critique you you don't point out how one can improve? I digress. the little details on the mane and wings, they seem a bit off to me. I understand that you wanted these details to show what you can do, and that's a good thing. The problem I have is that it seems too realistic for the pastel coloured ponies. The point of G4 is not to be realistic, but to be cartoon-like. I would have preferred more show-accurate manes and wings. That however, is my own opinion.
Oh coooool! tanks :3 i only know a few of the html tags lol. like the basic bold italic underline stuff, as well as subscript and the < sup > one. it would be useful if there's one for just changing the font size though lol. as sub doesn't work all that well sometimes
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